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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, Apr 15, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    I've been praying for a vision
    to console me in the night
    so many times I flirted with
    unholy imaginings
    mystical philosophies

    if only I could be spirited
    away
    to him
    to see
    how life is
    treating him
    without "we"

    Sunsets are now a thing
    most unkind ~ I hover
    'out of body'
    I live out of mind...

    Missing his touch ~
    knowing it had to be
    I lay awake
    and cry
    for me


    hadassah
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    beautiful flow Hadassah
    feeling all of this
    thank you for sharing
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    thank YOU

    Destee, for the warm welcome. I am going to enjoy my stay. :)

    hadassah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done continue on
     
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    i likes this flow i felt the vibe off this
    nice drop....Angel
     
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    Feeling this melancholy flow, and the sadness you expressed.
     
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    Your pen was truly speaking volumes for you. A sad but beautiful flow
     
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    Kudos to this flashback...

    a Diamond unearthed....

    Absolutely amazing...
     
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