Black Poetry : indigopoem: release.

i read this last night while we were on the phone...i chose to save my words until this morning, when i had time to think about the peace...

i feel somewhat uncomfortable trying to comment on this poem, because the sentiment speaks for itself, and it does not warrant any stylistic critique...in other words, i'm not sure what to say...other than i am glad that you have finally began to deal with the loss of benita...when we talked about it, i didn't think you would try to deal with it so suddenly, but maybe that was for the best...nevertheless, just know that, somewhere, benita is happy with the fact that you are finally making peace with her departure...

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alwaysthanks.


rich. just keep remembering... the one who
has the broken heart is the only one who knows
what it will take to heal. go slow... :heart:
poeticmensah. you don't really have to say
a thing, sweetie... i know where your heart is...
...i know you know how i feel.. & i just appreciate
you being there. thank you.
shazzy. thank you for re-affirming for me
that i am not alone. me & you... we're gonna be
just fine, my friend!! :)

itsallLove, chirens.
 

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