Black Poetry : Indigo Mood

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated To Miles...

    our initial introduction was
    both memorable & sweet
    I knew him by face & name
    but we had never been
    afforded the opportunity
    to actually meet—

    ….not up close & personal….

    I was out & about feelin’
    Kind of Blue… when
    I peeped him just casually
    standing there exuding an
    air that fully demanded my
    complete consideration—

    ….which I granted gladly….

    eventually I requested that he
    come home with me… to spend
    some tyme & he has taken my
    mind to beautiful & back with
    each engaging encounter into his
    amazing artistry—

    ….now we are inseparable….

    So What if his exterior would
    have me believe it’s All Blues
    hues of joy & brilliance bryght
    are what he brings… he softly makes
    love to me when he presses his lips
    together & blows steadily creating
    his marvelously esoteric magic
    just for me—

    …. I have fallen in love….

    © SunshyneOyrgynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzy piece queen. you know your scribe is tighter than shoes fo' sizes to small right? if you don't they are.

    one love, sean

    *blowing my horn and riffing*
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. Shyne

    thank you for this one.

    saleem
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, sweet sunshyne. lovin' this piece, mos def.
     
  5. Hunter

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    SISTA GURL!!

    I love the way Miles in making music just for you
    This is so so smoooooooooothhhhh
    Even with the unique turns in your road
    And the image of your hills
    It is smooth sis...
    Realllll smooooooooth

    *in-roads*
     
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    it NEVER ENTERED MY MIND
    that i would expereince
    BUDO (hallucinations)
    for in my MOON DREAMS
    of ISRAEL wrapped in
    ROUGE i witnessed the
    COMPLETE BIRTH OF COOL;

    DARN THAT DREAM! for
    in the midst of the
    MOVE i saw a GODCHILD
    in the arms of VENUS DE MILO
    and it made me feel
    KIND OF BLUE

    S'IL VOUS PLAIT poet for the tribute... ~signed, MILES...

    excelllent scribe from one jazz afficianado to another...
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tiiiiight!!!

    I'm am truly digging this scribe!!! Spring is definitely in the air.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh yes!

    feelin this "kind of blue" mood ~ luvs me some Miles ~ brings to mind "flamenco sketches" forever etched in my mental...

    aaahhh yes, this brought the smiles...

    for miles!

    A
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS GUYS!!

    Verb...your opinion is Always valued!

    Zorbshun...just let me know when & i'll be there! i'm serious!

    Saleem & Shaneak...thanks for the read!

    Lister...dear friend! i've been waiting for you! as always... you are appreciated.

    D...awww! that was nice! thanks for leaving it for me... you gonna host the listening party? :)

    Ms A & Hunter...... my sisters & my inspirations! i would be lost without your replies! how else would i know that i'm on the ryght track??! :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SLOW DANCING IN YO RAYS OF JAZZ
    AND IN THE SPRING MORNING LIGHT
    LOVIN DES HERE......
     
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