Black Poetry : Indifferent to

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What have they done,
    For me lately...
    But ignore my quips ~
    When I flip the script
    Zip is all you get

    Said our vows together
    For better or worse
    Even wrote a verse
    Now the dowry's cursed

    Passions aren't burning
    Ain't no mandolin playing
    Ain't no anthem singing
    Just the prayer, I'm praying

    Love undercover...
    That's a pack of lies
    When it's you despised
    In your brothers eyes


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    take the time,
    to remember the days.
    when ya'll two,
    were going seperate ways.
    and thank God,
    for letting ya'll come to be.
    instead of complaining,
    about little things.........(loved it)
     
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    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    the "lyrics" of this poem were explosive wow the words flow perfectly!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very much on point love within
    ya vibe was wall banging !
     
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    lilcherry76- I appreciate you and love the tight little responses you lay on us. Drop by anytime-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    poeticwordstris- You WOW me with such enthusiasm, much obliged. Please come again-

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    Brother RICH, missed you, but happy to know that you are well. Drop a lil sumpin-sumpin so I can get my rhythm together.
    Thanks.
     
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    VICTORIOUS

    Thanks Sister, (In the spirit) I'm claiming that victory that you spoke of so eloquently- in the name of my savior Jesus Christ.
     
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    Where my boys at?
     
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