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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :hearthis:
    Blood stain the land
    groundz stolen at hand
    by the english white man
    yet celebrate da feat
    like it's a lovin treat
    on da harvest they feed
    but native heart tumble weed
    sitting Bull vs pligrim pride
    like it a november joy ride
    what is it to be thankful for
    when it was stolen to da core
    what are we honoring here
    it about native american steer
    so don't feast the yam of the
    englishmen scam of da foreign
    land da secret groundz of
    native worriors first at hand
    can u my people understand
    what are u thankful for
    the giving of blood taken souls
    on da rocky dusty trail roads
    how can we honor this day
    when it wasn't a true hoilday
    they dance and prance
    started to feast on what they
    stolen com'mo please
    do u feel da weep tears
    shead upon dis day when
    the native land was taken away
    so what are u thankful for
    thanksgiving is all hype
    and it's not honored right
    so don't break bread
    on da head of the native dead
    don't cut the bird
    this just da white man word
    to feast and celebrate a treat
    of the land of da free
    native american INDIANS
    now u see this not the way
    it should be it was taken of 1620
    so really what are u thankful 4...
    blood stain da land which we call
    AMERICAN
    blood drips from tears of
    NATIVE creed
    Blood cover da food
    broken pieces now u choose
    Thanksgiving a joy from
    defeat of english pligrim core
    what are u thankful 4..........
    blood stain da land
    i'm sorry u don't understand
    Da blood stain banner of
    Native tribe american land
    stolen by the white dayum man
    thanksgiving
    !
    they thankful for what they took
    lies stolen and betrayed to get
    we should cry not rejoice in feast
    da harvest not our to give
    what are u thankful for !
    T~H~A~N~K~Z~G~I~V~I~N~G
    pleaseeeeeee
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something to think about...celebrating a slaughter of people. I liked the way you brought those thoughts home in poetry....flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we have honored the taste of fruitful foods on da secret groundz of Natives
    thankzgiving is not so thankful ............word up sis.
     
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    Oh heck yeah! This one has me jumpin up and down, brotha. You really outdone yourself right hurr.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed what are we thankful 4
    when it was stolen to da core
    strip of the pride of da secret groundz
    blood spill da land by da englishman
    known as pligrims
    feasting on defeat setting of dis drama
    treat and calling it a hoilday
    where they sit around all day
    eatting from da flicked wound
    of da NATIVE AMERICAN
    can u feel da blood flow
    how can we be thankful
    dis not da day !
    thanksgiving slan stain da land
    word up sis.
     
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    much love
    it's not a day of celebration
    but a day of remembrance
    of the ones who walk the land
    free as the air once breath
    no it is not a time to celebrate
    but to embrace the ancestor road
    their trust of the heart
    the goodness they fought
    and in the in
    they was condem
    no i don't celebrate this time
    nor do i grace the white man pride
    through the split of there tongue
    all was lost
    but one day will be founded again
    much love dear brothers
    Peace and love always
    heart is heavy from the flow

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    native american
    Indians free
    i treasure da tribes
    not da white man
    pligrim pride in da
    feast of giving thanks
    around these people
    all i feel is greed
    for there dirty deed
    dis da day to remember
    da creed of bleed
    stolen land of the
    indian man
    not so thankful
    but deeply remembered
    of 1620 ....................
    i hear ya Bluewater word up !
     
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    we feast on the harvest
    but are we thankful
    when we still in depression
    are we thankful
    as we eat in laughter
    when we still in deep struggle
    yet not able to bond in unity
    or are we thankful
    that we can lift a soul from
    da cold and offer bread
    feed the hungery
    cloth the nude
    shelter a homeless body
    are we still thankful for
    seeing millions of our
    people this way

    what are we thankful for
    when it hard to da core
    what are we celebrating
    the birth of freedom
    of the pligrim pride
    of stolen bloody land
    call American
    tell what are we thankful for ?
     
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    as usual $$RICH$$ your poetry makes me speechless, i don't know much about thanksgiving because my parents completely banned me from celebrating it but i do belive it is wrong to celebrate bloodshed, thank you for sharing this with us!!!
     
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    indeed sis forth the blood shed
    to give such thankz is da pride
    of pligrims early settlers 1620
    stolen land of da Natives
    word up good choice ............
     
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