Black Poetry : Indian Summer

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It won't be long,
    Till summer's all gone
    And the heat is on
    In the coming fall

    Will lingering birds ~
    Prolong their stay
    Ignore nature's call,
    Deny southern jays

    Procrastinating-
    Seasons change-up pitch
    Which can throw a sultry curve
    That is often a hit

    For insect and critter,
    Continuity works...
    Man, all the queerer
    Begins to shirk

    Pleasure craft masts
    Must cruise the bay,
    Should Indian summer :cool:
    Have its way...


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i like your writing style

    :toast:

    keep writing

    one

    pd

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  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD, Thanks...I like your style.

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    likin the meterically perfect flow of this poem.
    Your timing and style is tyte.

    *Emma*
     
  5. 1poetsought

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    Euphoria- a warm thank you, for facilitating real time...
    Substantiating dream time... Good day!

    1poetsought ~ :kiss:
     
  6. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, but this is lovely. I'm all too familiar with the "Indian Summer".

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    Very lovely!! i like this lots!!!
     
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    AMBERLY

    What a beautiful name be Amberly'
    We can't breathe it enough-

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    LyrikalShe- you complete me!

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