Black Poetry : Incident (don't bother)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by prosthticsoul, Oct 17, 2001.

  1. prosthticsoul

    prosthticsoul Member MEMBER

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    I am the vampire at my own veins
    self creating monster
    Injustice drives me to the edge
    my soul is soaked in anger
    Soaked and then not hung to dry
    but carelessly tossed aside
    Stinking ruined abandoned for dead
    I'm forced to swallow my pride
    To let the system handle things
    to deny my inner man
    i can't protect the ones i love
    Self respect crushed by his hands
    I'd love to take his life away
    I wish to see him bleed
    To look to me with fear filled eyes
    and beg me from his knees
    Plead with me to spare his life
    cringe at thoughts of pain
    and then i'd rip his face apart
    and wipe away the stain
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like somebody

    is a tad bit upset... Nice flow.. actually a very good flow.. Understood where you're coming from also.. but that much anger?... Oh well... it bee's like dhat sometimes...

    I Pray for peace within...
     
  3. Destee

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    I am L O V I N G this peace !!!!

    Whooooooooooooooaaaaaa !!!

    Go 'head on wit yo' bad self !!!!

    Speak that peace Poet!

    Welcome to the Family!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELCOME WITHIN

    SEE MY SMILE
    SEE MY GRIN
    WELCOME TO THE PLAYGROUND OF DESTEE'S PLACE
    AS U CAN ROAM TRACE THE SMILES, FEARS AND SWEET
    DROPS OF TEARS WELCOME UPON DIS HOUSE OF LOVE
    AS I ROAM THE SKIES JUST ABOVE ........YA JUST BEEN BLESSED
    :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all draw from a different plane of REAL...

    i'll leave it like that. WELCOME TO THE PLAYGROUND.

    peace&manyblessings.

    oh, yes, the flow was on...but you know that.
     
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