Black Poetry : Incentives

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eve :

    it surprises me

    the way he prizes me

    it's as if his Publisher's Clearing House prize is me

    friend :

    i know what you mean Eve

    my boyfriend

    the way he sizes me

    you’d think the only thing he sees in his eyes is me

    eve :

    exactly




    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    Hello Howard...


    This is a sweet piece! I especially like the lines in bold.
    It reads as if there should be more, is it an excerpt?


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart: