Black Poetry : INCARCERATED

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Olorun1, Oct 1, 2003.

  1. Olorun1

    Olorun1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The somber look of despair
    in a hopeless sea of unfair
    sad young faces sleeping away the pain
    of chain locked doors and unfamiliar stares
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    I refuse to comprehend,- why are we all insane
    exuding the behavior of misery and nonsense
    Restrained! Dead bolt locked and chained
    belt - cuffed to my waist!
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    How can I move away
    from all this misery and pain?
    Crying in desperate wails
    even my dreams are nightmares in hell!
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    Why in the name of God
    do I have to suffer in life ?
    Disrespect, yelling in my face
    All I want to know: - Is where do I belong ?
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    How can I grow - feeling so alone?
    Oh Lord! All I need is hope
    Please release me from these chains
    Don't abandon me to drown alone
    in this vast hopeless sea of despair.

    J.S


    PEACE




    :(
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya...very profound.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    we all feel this way
    at one time or another
    this was a very strong piece
    supa scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thiswas a strong piece...
    much love for it
     
  5. Bluewater

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    the feeling is strong
    so deep
    it touches the heart
    as i cry ..a silent cry
    much love
    Peace
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cryin tears of understanding my brotha...flow on
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm.....wise words. Flow on....
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep stuff i feel ya within
    keep flowing.....
     
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