Black Poetry : Incarcerated Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waking up lonely again, still no calls
    Hoping you're holding up okay behind those walls
    Where did you go? Why did the phone stop ringing?
    Without you to talk to my heart has stopped singing
    Without you in my life, it's gotten hard to write a line
    Was it your inspiration, or was the talent really mine?
    Finding the right words is getting harder to do
    Maybe the right words are, "****, baby I NEED you!"
    So once again I wait by the phone jumping at every ring
    But it's not you again, someone trying to sell me something
    Don't they know that my baby has been transfered upstate
    Oh and just so you know, I'm planning to wait
    3 years is a grip, but can't touch the way I feel.
    Baby don't you know that this love is for real
    Here goes the phone, please let it be you.....

    "Hey baby.......I was just thinking of you"
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt the emotion radiating from this flow!
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa.
    These lines a heavy with love.
    feelin' this flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully sprayed poetically
    tyte.
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments
     
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    wow, i felt this deep , thick love for your man vibrating off this piece :) well written :)
     
  7. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you SwtT and everyone else who sends me love. I am going through a hard time in my life right now but t has been great to find a place filled with such love. It really has helped me! Much love to my Destee family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:LUVV:
     
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