Black Poetry : in your eyes...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in your eyes
    i see the future

    happy times
    scream their release
    as i wine and dine
    the heart and soul
    of thee

    in your eyes
    i see joys and fears
    ...laughter and tears
    shed over many years of
    i love you
    i love you
    I LOVE YOU.

    in your eyes
    i see passage ways
    to a tomorrow day
    when old couples act like teenagers
    as they cuddle and play

    i see
    ...in your eyes
    a one-of-a-kind love
    with fluttering hearts
    like you've never dreamt of
    intense emotions running through
    a lifetime of smiles
    shared with you

    in your eyes, i see
    valentines
    with chocolates
    and white wine
    topped with red rose love
    during coochie time {i couldn't resist}

    {i'd have to say
    i love the rock
    and gentle sway
    of you.}

    in your eyes, i see
    a drama-free society
    with passion-filled, romantic nights
    of love and lust
    throughout my life

    in your eyes, i do see
    wedding plans
    for you and me
    honeymooning in the sands
    Jamaica Isle
    ...champagne in hand
    and with the moonlight
    high above
    caress your heart
    ...fill you with love

    as the moonlight's glow
    softly gleams
    off ocean waves
    and other things
    we sway to the rhythm
    of a gentle row
    and watch the mind dance
    to and fro

    while i was caught up
    in your eyes
    i saw, there, strength
    where beauty lies

    in your eyes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    IN HER EYEZ

    NUTHING BUT LOVE
    MAN LOVE LOOK INTO HER EYEZ
    I FEEL YA ON THIS ONE BIG TYME:D
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel the emotion is this Great poem!
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    in your eyes I see L O V E!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    say it again Ubzo

    say it again


    this was a WONDERFUL piece ballerman :)


    pd
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    giving me such a beautiful feeling....I love love love love love all of this piece....

    but there is a part that spoke to me in exclamation points as you flow'd this gem...

    in your eyes, i see
    valentines
    with chocolates
    and white wine
    topped with red rose love
    during coochie time {i couldn't resist}

    {i'd have to say
    i love the rock
    and gentle sway
    of you.}


    very, very earthy/sexy vibe.....oh yeah :)

    thank you

    a
     
  7. onzhay

    onzhay Active Member MEMBER

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    in my eyes...this is one hellafied script. awesome writing.

    Zhay
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the eyes...

    are the windows to the soul
    all you have to do is look to behold
    all that she is
    ...all she will be
    chaos and corruption
    or peace and tranquility

    THANKS FOR FEELING ME, PEEPS.
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful..

    looking into deep pools and finding all your dreams reflected...
    in the love of a woman....

    sweet words...

    K
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller, this piece is just lovely. i agree with alyce...very sexy, it is.
     
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