Black Poetry : In Your Eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by abstract219, Jun 16, 2006.

  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    In your eyes,
    the light is shining thru.
    And everything you've told me
    is coming true.

    In your smile
    The strength of many men,
    could never pull me from you.
    My love never ends.

    In your arms,
    I've found my home.
    I promise you this once, Queen
    I'll never leave you alone.

    In your thoughts,
    Praise of the Ancestors.
    and all the grace they've brought here.
    And the wisdom they've left us.

    In your mind.
    I hope I can remain.
    The one that you can count on
    Shelter from the rain.

    In our child,
    the union of a Blessed Love
    We'll watch her grow steadily
    to bless the stars above.

    In your heart,
    the bloom of a 1000 flowers.
    My love for you grows constantly
    By the hour.

    In your touch,
    When our love is stirring
    You always leave me wanting more..
    A hungry yearning.

    In this life,
    I'm not offered much,
    But there's heaven in your kisses,
    Joy in your touch.

    In your eyes
    The light is shining thru,
    And the best I have to offer,
    Is my love for you.

    (c)2006 intercontinental abstractions.
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww.. brother abstract... you keep oudoing yourselff

    the love song of a poet resounds clearer than all others...

    In your thoughts,
    Praise of the Ancestors.
    and all the grace they've brought here.
    And the wisdom they've left us


    i'm so moved... love is the best gift man has to offer... funny i've always said it was a smile... lol... such a fortunate Queen to have a King see so much in her eyes, thoughts, touch, etc...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    each line that mix hit the spot this was mad awesome poet !
     
  4. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the evolution of the in your touch, eyes, etc..... throughout this. This was sweet like ice pound cake with a scoop of ice cream. Keep dropping that sugar flow!
     
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