Black Poetry : In Your Crown

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Jan 17, 2006.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're my man, my mighty king,
    And I'm the jewel in your crown,
    You're the sun so hot and bright,
    I'm your light-rays shining down,

    You're the sky so vast and blue,
    And I'm the white clouds in your chest,
    I'm a river clean and pure,
    Who in your ocean finds her rest,

    You're the mountain huge and high,
    I'm the valley green and wide,
    You're the body firm and strong,
    And I'm a rib bone on your side,

    You're an eagle flying high,
    I'm your feathers light and brown,
    You're my man, my king of kings,
    And I'm the jewel in your crown.
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :tweety: That was so beautiful gurl
    Flow on boo!:tweety:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh!
    u see me as i am ...

    really this was beautifully posed
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was endearing how i like how your formed your words to flow into a lovely rhyme. flow on my sista:kiss1:
     
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    I think everyone has said it
    This was beautiful for real
    Very touching piece
    Much Love Poet
     
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