Black Poetry : ...in your bed...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i got all these thoughts
    runnin' through my head
    and i never thought
    i'd be in you bed
    what am i to do?
    cuz i'm in a daze
    and somewhat confused
    about my future days
    last night changed my life
    we did the unknown
    cuz you changed my life
    you did this on your own
    just one simple kiss
    captured my being
    sending me to remiss
    in the esscence of your being
    i said i'd never love
    again in my life
    but you changed that love
    over and over last night
    i wanna be the one
    you come home to everyday
    i wanna be your one
    and massage your stress away
    who ever thought we would
    end up in this heaven?
    i never thought we would
    get past step seven
    the step of you and me
    being more than friends
    but now i clearly see
    i was so mistaken
    last night you took me
    straight to heaven
    last night you shook me
    and left me awakened
    you showed me i can be
    a lover to your soul
    and you gave me sanity
    to say yes to your proposal...
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my...i liked this alot, its so romantic,
    i enjoyed reading u!
    much love,
    -story
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, this is just too beautiful...i've had one of those 'last nights'. i can feel ya girl...much love
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks story and truelove:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well !
    i hear the bells ringing
    and joy fill da air
    dis lastnight stay
    made u see da light
    happiness of smile
    wishing u all the joy , peace & happinesssssssssssss!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful:heart:
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwww thanks so much rich:)
    thanks swtt:)
     
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    this was nice
     
  9. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful!
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks angel and skin:)