Quiet Poetry Lounge : In your absence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sevens_love, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    In your absence
    I exist in the bliss of reminiscent love
    The stillness of this moment
    Cause my being to be engulfed by your unforgotten essence
    My body begins to unwind
    My mind begins to drift
    Taking me to visions of you
    The flawless frame
    Your soul filling eyes
    The ensorcelling lips I’ve met with a smile
    I feel your touch
    Your soft warm breath caressing the back of my neck
    Losing myself in imaginary embraces
    In this stillness
    I hear you reaffirm your love for me
    And at the same time I promise my heart to you

    In your absence
    I conceptualize your body pressed up against my back side
    Savoring the moment
    I breath in and then out, drifting farther in ecstasy
    Feeling your tongue dance across my neck
    I take your hand
    Letting you feel what you’ve done to me
    Turning over I meet your gaze
    The sincerity in your eyes – the gate to your soul
    Opens me up even more
    An unarticulated command
    Draws me to your lips
    And unyieldingly
    My physical being commences to manifest my love for you
    Feeding each other’s desire
    Together we approach love’s rapture

    In your absence
    In the stillness of the moment
    I see visions of you
    Wanting me
    Me desiring you
    You needing me
    And me capturing you
    Giving myself only to you


    ~Seven:heart:
     
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    this was seven heaven just sweet butifully laid out
    very nice piece
    welcome to destee.com
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was awesome. I could sense the yearning in this descriptive imagery. Welcome to Destee poet.
     
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    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks lovelies
     
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    This was so so so so so lovely. Beautiful through and through. Welcome home, family...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    welcome to destee.com
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    Friday night is Poetry throw down

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    this poem gave me a little fantasy of the one that i miss... thanks for helping me paint that picture
     
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    The things the mind say
    when we are apart from
    our loved ones!!!!

    Beautiful!! Beautiful!! Beautiful!!
     
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