Black Poetry : In You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 5, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In you
    I'm in love
    In you
    I'm alive
    In you
    I am strong
    In you
    I am long

    Long on love
    Keeping us above
    The regular day to day love

    In you
    Another level of Ooo and Ahh
    In you
    We're so **** good
    The best of us by far

    In you
    Oh sweet baby
    I'm going crazy

    In you
    Over you
    You cannot be seen
    Only felt beneath me
    Engulfed in my rhythm
    Smothered by my pounding love

    In you
    I am lost
    In you
    My love is found
    In you
    We're together
    In you
    Up off the ground

    BE
     
  2. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I long to find that feeling....
    What a feeling it will be...eventually :)
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    is this erotica Heartbeat ???

    i mean ... i'm just wondr'n ... :)

    Destee
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could be Destee :)
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think it's Loverotica!

    Nawwwww MsDestee, this is more than erotica, this is LOVErotica...emphasis on love! Well done Heartbeat, you
    do sing a love song so well!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....ahhh yes!

    :):)

    Alyce
     
  7. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    P

    gonna add this to my "mood enhancement collection"....:wink:

    (you coming out with a book of erotic poetry, Mr. Beat?) :D

    Shade
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    master lover u flowed the hell out dis one here
    BE......... I know she melt like butter