Black Poetry : In you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caught in different shades of what you remind of me of.
    I slowly
    fall
    into an
    abyss of
    alternate realities
    and non-descript fallacies
    that only do
    more harm
    than please.
    The epiphany
    achieves what
    I most definitely
    have the desire and need.
    In you I want to have my existence and
    my being.
    I want to breathe you
    and think you.
    I need to feel you
    and live within you.
    In short,
    I want
    to be
    the I in you
    and
    the the
    creation
    of a
    memory...
    a thought...
    the sweet embrace and
    whisper
    of
    you...

    ...Love



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    ~Earthly Allure
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet
    i really enjoyed this flow
    what a vibe
    likes....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was on point and sweetly composed to a heart
    tyte write
     
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    Wow...I'm diggin the rhythm and style of your flow.
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow

    "her voice flows like water"
    ~Musiq
     
  6. Earthly Allure

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