Black Poetry : In You I Find

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  1. DestinyLove222

    DestinyLove222 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In You I Find true delight
    the meaning of feeling great
    especially at night
    When I am with you my heart
    pounds out of control
    Its like your sexy brown eyes
    like deep into my wondering soul
    I never knew it could be this way
    but you showed me there can be a
    brighter day
    In You I Find peace of mind
    You make me fee at ease
    when everything around me is chaos
    I know I can count on you through everything
    You are my rock
    Your kisses set my soul on fire
    with desire
    In You I Find pure heaven
     
  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is probably the shortest piece I've read on this forum thus far, but that's exactly what I like about it. The fact that you can say so much in so little words. Lovely piece no doubt and keep on flowin!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you find so much in one person, that is a blessing indeed. What a lovely scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it brings a sweeter heart afloat
    this was very nice .................
     
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    This is a very lovely poem.
     
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