Quiet Poetry Lounge : In which she came

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like a magic moment of time
    which she came gracefully devine
    flash a heart of caring shine
    and allow me her loving time

    Her face was of deep caress
    dat would make any man confess
    she came from heaven's doors
    upon the walks and growing rose

    She not mines to keep
    but for which she came was unique
    pose a joy humble and sweet
    and gave me a life's big treat

    which she came was right on time
    but yet reality bid still i'm blind
    she truely is a one of a kind
    as i envision someday she be mine
     
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    Your words are so soft, like billowy clouds. Sounds like an angel came upon you. Why shouldn't she be yours? Such a beautiful write.
     
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    amazingly written

    wow... like this Rich...

    thank you for sharing this side of yourself...

    truly I appreciate this piece right here.....

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well Watz u know sometime what u see and have is not always yours to keep
    but just a loaner for the time shared in that space in that moment . Thank u sis

    Thank u so much MissLady for the warm love and honor
     
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    Upon da grace of her world
    i can really feel her swirl
    coming closer in my fold
    she a treasure bigger then gold
    in which she came
    was right on time
    made me glow arise and shine
    what an angel from da skyline
     
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