Black Poetry : In Time

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the hands of time,
    lies the truth.
    the truth that was kept,
    for all those years.
    the truth that the person wanted to know,
    when they asked.
    the truth to that dark secret,
    that everyone was afraid to answer.
    and only in that time,
    will it be told.
    and all those shameful faces,
    will become more shameful.
    all those people that are hidden in the dark,
    will come to light.
    no lie,
    will lie uncovered.
    and in the hands of time,
    all will be seen.
    no shadows,
    no--------not even one,
    in time................ :nono:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice poem
    enjoy readin it
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head nicely written
     
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    Yes, the truth usually does come to light in time, I liked this.
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love, it's the only thing that keeps me going poetic wise, much love to all..... :jumping:
     
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    HI!!!

    NICE FLOW SISTA!!! THE TRUTH WILL COME OUT INDEED!!!!!
    I LIKE!!! :)