Black Poetry : In thine place

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  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In thine place remembrance
    oh, peaceful shadows comfort
    past a thought of nowhere
    caring not to be indifferent of time
    or a distant whine
    find enraptured coagulating bounce
    as if today never passes
    cleansing lenses
    so the world can see thoughtful romances
    go still just a moment
    hush, wait and listen
    just to allow tomorrows planned freedom
    glisten on afterwords kisses
    so it is as it may be
    and we, well we pursue golden dreams
    hedged bets gambling wrecklessly
    while tightening overstretched seams
    deliver us from ourselves
    and yes that too can cause pain
    but like so many healed wounds
    give gifts of ending rain
    in thine place remembrance
    oh, wafting shadows soon gone away
    perhaps the sun will greet us again brilliantly
    providing the chance to improve another day...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man DJ in da houseeeeeeeeeee!!!!
    dis was too sweet bru!
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fam...been gone for a minute. thought i'd drop in and see whats been going down.
     
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    Ahhh...and so it is...so beautiful.
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mesmerizing as always...

    NOW, think about dropping BACK in and letting US see what's going down. (I know I can get an "Amen" unless the rest of you are sleeping on this). :wink:
     
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    Amen
    eyes wide open
    and the mind 2
    yes indeed
    this is a beautiful
    well felted.
    thanks for bringing
    it back to the front page
    Nia Maishani
    Peace
     
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    AMEN :) aint no one sleep sista....thanx for bringing this one back :)
    tyte piece/peace
     
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