Black Poetry : In The Shower …

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In The Shower …

    In the shower is the best place, next
    To have a conversation right after sex
    Close quarters, close contact … verbal disclosure and discourse
    Warm wet bodies in close proximity, and yet no intercourse
    While the water runs down your body, small rivers running down your back
    The suds of soap running down your ăŝŝ and ăŝŝ crack
    I rub your shoulders in the midst of a showers spray
    I open my ears as you talk about the things that happened during the day
    Verbal inclinations sometimes interrogative, sometimes exclamatory
    Sometimes there’s rage in your voice and your tone is inflammatory
    Sometime there are bouts of levity and intimate grace
    Sometimes I interject a few words that puts a smile on your face
    Amidst the backdrop of a constant spray of water
    I have the honor and the privilege to wash the back of your mothers’ daughter
    And have an intimate conversation with you, this self same hour
    A private forum and an exchange of verbal wit, in the shower

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2007
     
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    I've just been officially lead away to a soapy, slippery, sensual, sudsy, sempiternal serendipity after reading this spicy hott piece:spinstar:

    :rain:

    :picture:


     
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    Spicybrown (sounds like cinnamon to me) ... Thanx for the read :)
     
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    This scribe exudes sensuality and intimacy. Much enjoyed poet.
     
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    Thanx 4 the read :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    STEAMY !!!!!
    da shower hour of pleasure
     
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