Quiet Poetry Lounge : In The Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Mar 19, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take my hand
    We'll run through the door
    Skip every other step going down the stairs
    We'll run around in the pouring rain
    Dodging raindrops
    Trying not to get wet
    Arms extended with our heads tilted back
    Spiraling upward
    Spinning
    Laughing

    We'll stick out our tongues
    Tasting the reason for our fun
    Stomping our feet in rain puddles
    Splashing each other
    Looking into each others eyes
    Through raindrops on our eyelashes

    Our clothes stick to our bodies
    Our bodies drenched with joy
    God's water runnimg down our face
    Gathering at the corners of our mouths
    Mouths that are smiling
    Joined by hearts and souls that are loving
    You and I
    Playing in the rain

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let's

    get drenched in the refreshing
    spray ~
    ~let's soak up life
    and love this way
    ~get sopping & wrinkled
    while we play

    & cling wet like this
    allllllllll night, allllll day

    thanks for the inspiration!

    :wink:

    A
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    sounds like so much fun!

    :heart:

    Beautiful Flows Poets
     
  4. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    how it's supposed to be.

    I like the images here.

    s
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    you make me feel like grabbin the brewsky and makin some rain to get wet in (hehehe)....

    thank you (and Ms. A) for bringing my smiles...there is no pain when I'm smiling.

    T
     
  6. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so fresh

    so good!


    Thank you, BE!

    B
     
  7. darkdiamondboy8

    darkdiamondboy8 Member MEMBER

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    love will be there let us have fun. let the rain take our minds dont let the rain take the negative away lets u be togater for ever
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very beautiful scribe of a poet's hand of love
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed very beautiful scribe....
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, love can make U act like a happy child all over again.

    Spending time in any element playing with your very special friend.

    Very nice.
     
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