Black Poetry : In The Morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 12, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the morning
    when the day is new
    butterflies wash themselves
    in sunshine and dew
    this is the time
    I love being with you

    gone are the stars
    following the moon
    to places out of touch
    out of sight
    our partners in love
    through the moans of night

    turning to each other
    sleep in our eyes
    I feel like the sun
    warm as I rise
    in the morning
    in you

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...and

    a good morning to you, too.

    :heart:

    alyce
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely...
    you always flow it right!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    beautiful work Heartbeat

    simply beautiful~ :)

    pd
     
  5. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    g-evening heartbeat,

    i'm one of your biggest FANS... :)

    poetry ~ well i have enjoyed looking over all your work...

    reach for the stars and smile for me...:D


    have a nice day...
     
  6. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the morning is such a lovely time, and so was your every line.
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh....dis is so beautiful. Little and sweet.
     
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