Black Poetry : In the Morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dead by morning,
    not to live to see the day.
    cast into life's black hole,
    where if you're not a believer--you'll stay.
    dead by morning,
    and not by choice.
    but by the creator's hands your eyes closed,
    and were put to sleep by his voice.
    dead by morning,
    no long pain do you endure.
    but drifted away in your sleep,
    as do many of those who are pure.
    dead by morning,
    no farwells or any recompense.
    don't think that only the guilty die,
    for in death also lies innocence.
    dead by morning,
    or evening if the creator sees so.
    but make no mistake about it,
    when it's time we all must go.
    no hour doth tell us,
    or comes a minute with warning.
    get ready and live right,
    not for the moment-----------------------------but for the morning...... :wink:
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YEA!!
    beautiful piece lil one...and i totally agree.......by tha mornin'....!!


    onelove....



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wake up call here nice scribe for da morning
    flow on
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: Beautiful
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    nice write..
    da wake up call...
    keep on flowin
    much love on dis:angel1:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yup its true... live for now because there may neva be a later...
    wise words to live by
     
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    :luv: I feel you on this one. Good job hoping to hear more. Don't forget the Twin
     
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