Quiet Poetry Lounge : In the Morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, Jun 19, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    in the morning
    when the day is new
    butterflies wash themselves
    in sunshine and dew
    this is the time
    I love being with you

    in the morning
    gone are the stars
    following the moon
    to places out of touch
    out of sight
    our partners in love
    through the moans of the night

    in the morning
    turning to each other
    sleep in our eyes
    I feel like the sun
    so warm as I rise

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now dis makes me know love in da air

    again BRUCEEEEEEEEEEE!!! u bless dis page
    and showing ya romantic views of u & her
    i really love this piece
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Bruce, :wave:

    I love this piece!!

    It is well expressed!! :toast:

    Keep flowing!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    very beautiful, Bruce...a picturesque scene of enduring love....every morning.

    thank you for sharing

    alyce
     
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    wow...what a beautful way to welcome the new day..very nice
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is powerful stuff. Thanks for this.

    Bert
     
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