Black Poetry : In the Morning!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the morning as I stretch
    I can still feel your breath on
    my neck , you stir and you
    start to rise, and slip your
    hands between my thighs...
    and you rise...
    and I see sweet sunshine
    in my eyes!

    In the morning we make sweet
    slow love and stretch lavishly
    as we prepare to exit our private
    place...I see sunshine all over your
    face and I smile, and all the while
    you smile. I pull the sheets to make
    the bed...but you pull me down
    instead....and then I kiss your head
    soft butterfly kisses.
    and I see sweet sunshine in my eyes!

    In the morning as we call in to work
    and I allow the morning coffee to perk.
    I know we are going to make love all
    day...and play the way that lovers play!
    Cause it feels like that kind of day....
    And you just make me feel that way
    On a it's good to be a woman kind of day!
    I return and you start rubbing my feet.
    An especially delicious treat....
    I smile and say you do me and I will
    do you. It's so **** delightful the
    things that you do...
    and I see sweet sunshine in you!
    In
    the
    morning!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love it when sharing the eye look and see beauty
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, how romantic!

    "I see sunshine all over your
    face and I smile, and all the while
    you smile."

    i'm loving this line 'cause smiling is such a beautiful thing especially in this way. keep 'em coming missLB. nice drop!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is there a better way of starting the day?:)

    beautiful portrait, msluciousb
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this all the way to my toes girlfriend !!!!!!!

    Tasha
     
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    Hey u need to pass summa that sunshine this way cuz all i got is rain.I had some nice visuals on this one here!!
     
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    Yes! I have felt this way, "on a it's good to be a woman kind of day." Always tite writes her way. Mslb I say ...
     
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    must have been a really good morning to call in.. very nice...
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhh wee that's what i'm talkin bout sista



    One
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOh Yeah!

    It was an equally exciting experience as it is to write about...nice memories take me through the winter blues!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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