Black Poetry : In the Morning (Say Yes pt2)

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wake up on…..

    The right side of the bed
    And put my hand where you had laid
    I lick my lips in pleasure
    When I think of the love we had made

    I smile to myself as I….

    Think about that single moment
    When you bent to kiss me for the first time
    Our clothes just disappeared
    And we laid down for the first time

    It was like a dream
    I was floating like a natural high
    You kept bringin me to that peak
    And sometimes you didn’t have to try

    You spread my legs and entered your love
    And I let go of my guard last night
    Now, at 10 in the morning
    I sit here thinking “it just feels right”

    I think that I…..

    Changed our lives…
    But yet, only for the better
    I found something special in you
    You’re like a 10 page love letter

    I have no regrets about making love to you
    This is the first time I have ever felt like this
    You bring out the very best of me
    I think I sealed that affection with a kiss

    I see you come out the shower now
    With a towel wrapped around your waist
    You got that knowing look in your eyes
    That say “I got to have another taste”

    You come up to the side of the bed
    To check out the outline of my frame
    I scoot over close to you
    Smile and softly say your name……


    "Good Morning Alex"
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    so tender
    is love that is mutually
    surrendered...

    love dat scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was off the hook, so sweet! Oh my gosh *tears in the eyes* Well, thanks for sharing, that was beautiful....
     
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    i like this alot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gentle sweetness
    love on waves i love how dis was posed
    flow on !
     
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    Nice follow up to Say Yes...I remember the Pt.1 quite well. Great work Swt-T.

    So his name is Alex, huh...
     
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    Hey Swt..
    this is nice
    liking PT 2
    as the poem flow
    the story is told
    this is so cool
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everybody for replying!!!! :)
     
  9. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow wow very nice pts 1 and 2 look forward to what u will bring next.
     
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