Black Poetry : in the mood

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Jan 4, 2004.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:


    Copyright © 2004cj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    likes ya flow...Peace
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes CoCo ..........poeticly sprayed here
    da feel of poetry with passion
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So creatively posed...I really liked this read.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel & Watz... I'm glad you enjoyed the read,
    thanks for showin' love :)


    Rich...Yeap, I got it badd for poetry :wink:
    btw... How you doin'? I miss you. :)


    Coco :heart:
     
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  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm... there are few things
    that feel good going in and
    coming out...

    yes... poetry is special and
    a great release.

    thanks for the brothaly love :)

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco :heart:
     
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    With each day that passes I yearn 2 exchange words with your mental.
    The attraction goes beyond the physical, your mind is what I'm into.
    Let's lay under the starlit sky & see each other with our 3rd eye,
    Forgetting about appearances, we embrace the others inside...
    Heart, mind, & soul.
    Let God's grand design be shown
    In the form of our exchanging prose.
    Rearranging chosen words into beautiful sentences
    that speak the innermost thoughts ...
    Let my words hit your heart with the same intensity
    as if you've been shot.
    Is this what U want?
    Verbs, nouns, adjectives, commas, & question marks
    that slip into your mind & leave impressions on the thought patterns?
    Costs matter only when something has a fee,
    But my words 4 U are totally free.
    All U have 2 pay is attention.

    Nice piece, totally diggin' your flow.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah, I love your originality, coco. This made me smile
     
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    Coco, I loved this the instant I read it. Furthermore, it helped inspire me to write "VIRTUOSO". Thanks for being Coco, and a great inspiration to us all. :jumping:
     
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