Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Jan 4, 2004.
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likes ya flow...Peace
o'yes CoCo ..........poeticly sprayed here
da feel of poetry with passion
So creatively posed...I really liked this read.
Angel & Watz... I'm glad you enjoyed the read,
thanks for showin' love
Rich...Yeap, I got it badd for poetry
btw... How you doin'? I miss you.
this was a sweet poem....
that poet sounds special....
Khasm... there are few things
that feel good going in and
yes... poetry is special and
a great release.
thanks for the brothaly love
With each day that passes I yearn 2 exchange words with your mental.
The attraction goes beyond the physical, your mind is what I'm into.
Let's lay under the starlit sky & see each other with our 3rd eye,
Forgetting about appearances, we embrace the others inside...
Heart, mind, & soul.
Let God's grand design be shown
In the form of our exchanging prose.
Rearranging chosen words into beautiful sentences
that speak the innermost thoughts ...
Let my words hit your heart with the same intensity
as if you've been shot.
Is this what U want?
Verbs, nouns, adjectives, commas, & question marks
that slip into your mind & leave impressions on the thought patterns?
Costs matter only when something has a fee,
But my words 4 U are totally free.
All U have 2 pay is attention.
Nice piece, totally diggin' your flow.
ah, I love your originality, coco. This made me smile
Coco, I loved this the instant I read it. Furthermore, it helped inspire me to write "VIRTUOSO". Thanks for being Coco, and a great inspiration to us all.
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