Black Poetry : In the Mist

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw him, in the mist
    within my mind
    he was a myth
    of the magical kind
    He was the sweet
    spirit within
    his penetrating eyes
    his soulful grin
    I'm not sure
    if he's real
    but there's this
    aura that I feel
    indescribable
    but
    undeniable
    he captures
    and captivates
    within the mist
    so unclear
    can't quite see him
    so I fear
    that he's simply
    a figment of my
    imagination
    this guy
    this image of
    a man
    everytime I reach out
    as close as I can
    he disappears
    into the fears
    of yesteryears
    or is it he
    who's actually
    trying to capture me,
    in the mist....
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet introspective into the mist!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!
    captavity & fear
    da mist of visional
    imagination
    can he be in da mist
    or is it she just miss
    hummm!
    one think fo sho this was awesome and i wonder now !
    tyte scribe sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...
    thanks for sharing
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for stepping into the mist of it all 1poet.
    Rich, don't know for sure what lies in the mist...hard to see clearly. Thank you for stepping in.
    Thanks blkangel for stopping by.
     
  6. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz-To see the mist asks the question if it's to be looked at or seen through. A penetrating scribe. Nicely done, HH
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "To see the mist asks the question if it's to be looked at or seen through." Such a thought provoking response HH, indeed. Coming from one who can paint such a magical scene yourself, I truly appreciate your comments.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is indeed
    a wonderful poem
    flowing into the mist
    feeling the mystery
    Nice one sis
    Peace~N~Love:heart:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Blue, I appreciate your thoughts on this piece.
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mama this is what...DELICIOUS!!!! And you already know this! :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks:
     
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