Black Poetry : In the line of fire (fightin temptation)

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  1. dis ladi a pimp

    dis ladi a pimp New Member MEMBER

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    In tha line of fire

    In the line fire you can't deny your desire
    Body begins to prespire, heart races
    Forget about takin slower paces
    Lust soon builds up
    Body corrupts
    Lips tingle
    Spine runs cold
    In the line of fire your body looses complete control
    Can't handle it
    Bodys throwin fits
    Clothes are torn
    room as hot as heat wave in the middle of a storm
    In the line of fire u can't be still, you can't deny the
    sex appeal
    the feel
    U gotta learn to fight the temptation, let it burn
    But in the line of fire the feel of the burnin desire jus happens to be your only concern....u were once curious about that fire
    but see now u felt the burn so put down yo lighter
    Ur virginity can no longer be a virtue to u
    U gave it up so quick, like a trick workin the streets tryin to pay for her rent
    The consecqences of not fightin temptation are potent
    now ya walk aroun the hood
    Gotta bad rep now, cuz u been up to no good
    u feel used & useless..just as u should
    So In the end the number 1 lesson u learned
    Is that when u lay in the line of fire, chances are u'll get burned. :hot:

    - :heart: ,
    lyrical dYme aka dis ladi a P.I.M.P :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Point well taken, liked the matter of fact way you posed this very descriptive piece. Welcome to destee. Hope to read much more from you.
     
  3. dis ladi a pimp

    dis ladi a pimp New Member MEMBER

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    watz- thnx gurl...jus tryna get tha point out there that sex isn't just a game ya digg???..thnx again
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the house of solid love,
    In the line of fire...well put. this happens on a daily, yet far too many get burned. Wonderful script...do keep us reading, I like the road you travel.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    very well posed
    lookin for more from you
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow
    happy u join us in scribe
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & lovin bond
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say that!

    This message is right on point.
    Diggin this.
     
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    dis ladi a pimp New Member MEMBER

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    Queen- thank u gurl and im very happy to be here :fairy:

    Angel: thank u gurl!!! :thanks:

    $$RICH$$: thnx...happy u likin my scribe!! :rolling:

    Nita: ....thnx gurl...and trust u will be hearin more! :spin:
     
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