Black Poetry : In The Interest of Justice

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the interest of Justice

    I say why must black robes unbalance law books ?
    Putting truth on a face of a lying crook
    Maat will have you for this on his sharp hook
    Hindsight corrupted by Bias thinking & good looks

    Backwards justice shall not prevail with sense
    The offence was really the defense
    I sent a prayer on a smoke of incense
    God answers the calls of any ones innocence

    The smoke went up to the sky
    And God just asked you why
    Why did you harm this guy?
    Wrong answer given with no reply

    Behold I see a Black horse
    Can you follow my code morse
    The rider said of course
    Balance in his hands for all the worse

    The scales of justice are not for sell
    Your severed head tipped the scales *, it swells
    Your burnt skin in the underworld smells
    Forever you lie in waste in hell
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must say, you are certainly doing...You, wonderful poem and that's so on point, and as we know...Maat prevails in the end. keep the pen swinging cause I'm waiting and replying.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow...i like it alot...
     
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    In the end, God rights all wrongs. You use some intense imagery my brotha. Flow on poet of the week.
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother AA
    this was tight...
    really enjoyed this message...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow bruh wow!!
    keep droppin it like dis here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a way to bring a message...
    love the flow
    .....Angel
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thought provoking with a strong message...

    Great read!
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    al right poet of the week..
    "behold ..a black horse...
    rider sat upon it".. i know that and it continues..
    and an army of elders followed..they were robed in white robes"

    i pray we are that for you, for us, for we..
     
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