Black Poetry : In the garden of Serenity

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  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bit of heaven in this place
    Scent of love, sweet to the taste
    In this garden, we become one
    United, never undone

    When I'm with you, you fill my soul
    With each stroke my treasures unfold
    Soft moans and whispers, as you make love to me
    Here in the Garden of Serenity

    I want for nothing more,
    I see the moolight on the sea,
    waves beating the shore
    Here in the Garden of Serenity

    A bed made of sand
    making love hand in hand
    in the Garden of Serenity
    I am your lady and you're my man

    And so in the Serene Garden I have landed
    It inspires my soul to see such beauty
    I stand here, giving my all
    to my King,in the Garden of Serene :lovestruc:
     
  2. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the garden of nubia
    the sandy space i trace
    the love of yo face i
    place before u the
    crown of jewels
    beautifully done...
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you in the Garden, your beauty beyond compare
    and I hear a voice speaking forth from the air
    Telling me that its you that i've been looking for
    so now I'm opening the door
    for you to come in
    so that our reign can begin
    hand in hand, side by side
    throughout eternity we shall abide.
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the post Nlover....
    Thanks for the luv... :wink:
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How beautiful,....lovin you Bishop babe...
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nitaaaaaa.... You Go Girl!

    (i can't get rid of the feeling that
    keeps tellin' me that i know you... hmmm)

    2 words dear sister...
    Simply Beautiful!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AS I FLY MY FRIENDLY FLIGHT
    I SEE U MY QUEEN NITA IN SIGHT
    IN THE GARDEN OF LOVE
    I FLOW FROM ABOVE DOWN 2 LAND
    AS I TAKE HOLD OF YO HAND
    WE WALK THE SANDS OF BLISS
    AND I OFFER U MY SWEETEST KISS
    OF GENTLNESS...I LOVE THIS PIECE
    VERY SMOOTHLY DONE .
     
  8. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was some beautiful stuff

    that was definitely felt by a brotha
    this piece is presented was so much class

    i feeling you
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks So'ja, $$Rich$$, and GA_S...
    Glad you enjoyed this reading because
    I enjoy reading you guys too... :heart:
     
  10. Jam

    Jam Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm
    (I'm speechless)
    u were shining on this piece gurrrlll
     
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