Black Poetry : in the flow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Aug 15, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and at times it feels
    this love a rush
    a surge
    a tide of emotion
    meant to rise and
    overwhelm
    and the heart is at the helm
    only whimsically within
    the reach of any
    mental navigation
    and everything seems
    to get stirred
    lifted and carried away
    even when the mind strays
    from any point of comprehension
    love seems a beacon of thoughts
    sent across its own currents
    and it feels as I'm lost
    in the flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely ur a poet ....
    very nice scribe of the feelings
    when in the flow , i feel u coz i too get this feeling
     
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    I liked..... I liked so much.............................keep these flos coming.......
     
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    skrybe7, you have a lot of talent. Thanks for sharing it with us.
     
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    Hey Skrybe, was good readin your stuff as usual you always make my heart and mind wonder...

    The Dreamer
     
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    nicely flowed, i feel like this.
     
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