Black Poetry : IN THE FLESH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Jan 15, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    In this need for love
    Fallen victim to lust

    In lust
    I learn to trust... unjust

    In flesh
    I exercise the Eve in me

    My eyes behold
    My fleshly need

    I release
    And it feels so real

    I blush, from the rush
    Like a theif when she steal:

    Time from Time

    Lust lost me in the moment

    Love is eternal

    Love found me moving forward

    Onward,
    to love
    Eternal

    Forgive me,
    for my flesh this
    Moment
     
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    Hey Miss Lady
    Wow!
    This drop is so natural.
    I enjoyed the honest release of emotion
    that comes from the natural needs
    of our bodies, and it's all good.
    We are many women, a very nice package

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    I agree with Bluewater Miss Lady...we are not just one woman but many women with different levels of intricacies..from moment to moment...everchanging!

    Greatly enjoyed this flow! Keep it coming!!!!
     
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    Sir Real


    For REAL
    SURREAL
    :SuN006:
     
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    Miss Lady!!!!(I know You realize I always come Like that!!!!LOL)
    Honestly You talent is showing!!!!
    It's so often we as Humans(especially Women)
    Fall victim to our lust
    But it is once. We journey to our Ultimatum
    Rock Your Flow Sis.
    ~BLESS~
     
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    We are human, we all have needs, and desires. We also have the ability, thank goodness, to forgive ourselves for some decisions that in hindsight we wouldn't have made. Well written piece.
     
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    no need to apologize, go on 'head and express yaself! hee,hee,hee... loved this!
    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do what u do ......feelin u here
     
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    well crafted flow. Keep it coming
     
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    thank ya'll!!!!

    DS... what a purty smile!!! hee hee ....
     
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