Black Poetry : In the end??

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by givemefreedom, Dec 23, 2001.

  1. givemefreedom

    givemefreedom Member MEMBER

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    At that moment I called out your name,,
    But you closed your eyes and walked away.

    I wasn't ready to go,,, I was just begining to taste the air
    Just begining to hear the butterflies sing their songs
    Just begining to understand the rain.

    I called out to you,, but you closed your eyes and walked away.

    Does it matter how many time I've prayed to you
    or how many sins I've commited or
    how many broken lies I told?

    I called out to you,,,

    I prayed five time a day
    fellowed your ten commandments
    lived for you and no one else,,, That still wasn't enough.

    I called out your name,,,, but you,,,

    Because in the end it's not up to YOU(god) and in the begining it was never about YOU(god)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel ya here

    at start it was about u and u alone
    even if one feel self not heard
    one was listening feelin u within
    yet self must know it's all about self

    work dem key poet!!
     
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    This is not to hurt anyone feelings just how I felt at the time. So please don't take it personal. Thank you
     
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    never personal

    just expressing self emotional state of mind
    ya well understood
     
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    youhavefreedom
    to express yourself
    let the emotions flow
    share thots you know
    imagined or real
    your words do appeal
    to hearts that might not
    havethefreedom you got

    write the words poet

    see you at da party ...

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