Black Poetry : In the end is this

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Soullyricist, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand that you just can’t fathom the importance of my pen
    I’m reinvented every time my pen contemplates action
    And the fact is that I remove myself from my humanistic state and the moment I release
    From that point on, my pen plans my fate
    I just indulge in the unique persperation filled air I breath when ceased by my pen
    I become poetry and my pen suddenly becomes my best friend and
    We are close so close that my words and it’s ink sex so passionate that
    F!$K has new meaning
    Never mind this emotional affair and my uncontrollable screaming
    This very scribe you’re reading is the consistent result of me penversating result


    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scrath that last "result"
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte read....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely posed i like da way u scribe
    keep flowin da ink of ya pen
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like how you worked the concepts here.
    peace
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    This is a very well written piece!! I enjoyed the read!! I feel you on this one!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart: