Black Poetry : In The Beginning

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  1. UnknownPoet

    UnknownPoet Member MEMBER

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    In the beginning there was you
    and there was I
    all wasn't good...
    but then you met I
    sparks flied...
    I was excited
    so excited...

    and it began
    It began with those love struck eyes
    and tender caresses
    as long as we were together
    there was no room for stress
    excitement
    love...
    so enticing...
    each touch sparked fire...
    melting ice in my veins...

    the flames spread...
    consuming me...
    I began falling....
    falling..
    I fell,
    in love..
    deeper
    stronger..
    than any ocean's swell..

    now consumed...
    consumed by love's passion,
    love's obsession...
    my mind muddled
    my thoughts confused...
    I've fallen in love with you...
    what am I to do?
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What are you to do...

    You luv her to the best of your ability.
    I luv this piece because I Luv..Luv and
    everything about it.

    Enjoying your pen.

    Much Luv
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love makes the whirl go round ....keep spinning ya top poet,it's bound to come.
     
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    nice poem. you go along for the ride. dont wear your heart on your sleeve :)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep falling...

    for as long as the fall last! You know what's been said, "'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all" So enjoy!

    To me, its the climb and fall into love the feels soul-sweet, as does this piece.


    Feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  6. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    (fore myself)

    you showed me the curls,
    the strength of togetherness,
    the movement of truth,
    silky rivers releasing the fountain of youth,
    you couldn't explain how we came about,
    emotion grabs fulfillment,
    minds bounce outer state,
    without a planet of clout,
    i heard the voice climb max,
    from the temple pure out,
    flies the word of mouth,
    thunders of strait telepathy to the heavens and back,
    enlightening affection shudder amazing,
    behind the darkest doors,
    never shall i depart the red seas again,
    the glassy appeal is sown beautiful,
    full of life defined as the tribute,
    the synonym of ridicule,
    the slickest path discovered,
    covered and hibernating,
    only awakening on minus temptation,
    though it gets grooving soothe,
    slow and highly aware when i enter...
    you blessed me well up and centered,
    my journey through the jungle,
    all from the eye,
    kissed her one time,
    once upon ah rhyme,
    inn the beginning.
     
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