Black Poetry : In the Beginning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Sep 7, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ……….. In the beginning
    There was the word.
    And the word flowed like a sweet symphony of rhythms and rhymes.
    Caressing your every thought, stimulating the very essence of your soul reaching deep inside and pulling out your very heartbeat.
    seeping into your spirit like a warm mist.
    Nothing before
    Everything after
    Darkness became light
    Light shined like gold
    And the sky opened up and poured out:
    The Word
    In the beginning ………..

    Natasha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and the word be!?

    as i wait for thee for part 2 & 3
    u feel me .........coz i love this that much
    but i wonder what was that word!???hummmmm!!!:confused:
     
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    Now Natasha

    This is extremely unique and called immediately for a second reading and deep meditation. Original "flavors" are rare in poetry, so I relish every word of this.

    Thank you so much sistah girl, for this beautiful, beautiful piece.
    I was deeply blessed by it's originality and depth.

    www.joycerogers.net
     
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