Black Poetry : In Spirit

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  1. renae

    renae Active Member MEMBER

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    The hours are gettin' longer
    and i'm not gettin' any stronger
    with every second my heart will beat twice one for me one for you
    with every minute i'll take a breath for you
    within every hour the things i see and do will be for you
    every day is a day i'll pray
    that when i look back i'll see 3 sets of footprints in the sand
    Christ on the right, me in the middle, you on the left holding my hand
    pushing me on like you've always done
    that way i'm reassured that you're not entirely gone
    whoever said heaven was far from home
    was definitely wrong
    i feel your presence telling me i'll make it
    my partner in crime, i'm not gonna fake it
    there's a place in my heart that continually bleeds
    but now every day is for you. my days.. my deeds
    will be completed with you in mind
    my brotha, my friend, your light will still shine
    cause when i call
    i know you won't let me fall
    in spirit you'll always be there
    walking with me no matter where
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me feeling poetic chills!

    THis was so tight, I cannot begin to tell you what emotion I felt. It was like something so Universal it should be a part of a wedding ceremony. Well except the "partner's in crime", I loved it though, it was just beautiful.

    Blessings On Ya House!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply beautiful and how u open eyez to see
    ya not alone
     
  4. renae

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    thanx msluciousb and $$RICH$$....glad u liked it...it wuz dedicated 2 my bro who died six months ago on da 29th....i used "partner's in crime" cuz that's what we alwayz said we were cuz we used 2 get in2 a lot of trouble!!!
     
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    May God continue to bless the armory of the pen. Teach
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin you...flow
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really good piece

    i feel ya
     
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    i feel you queen...

    nfinite....
     
  9. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is nice Renae.
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's so nice that you find comfort in his presence and in the knowledge that he is still with you everywhere...belief in this, heals the hurt and makes the heart stronger...lovely peace..

    K
     
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