Black Poetry : In Search Of The Defninitive (an uncommon love)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...for the many times
    I've taken my pen
    to paper
    in futile attempts
    to
    describe this ...love

    yesterday,
    last night, this morning
    this very moment -
    it's clear to me
    ..there's an uncommon
    stirring inside...

    it fuels my drive
    pushing me

    I am compelled
    by an indescribeable
    urgency
    an inexplicable force
    to prove
    to the stars
    how you outshine them

    there is a kind of
    sweet conceit
    a strong desire
    to dare to show
    how better than
    all creation
    we be-come
    when we ... love

    ...can it be
    that He who
    watches over
    all
    pressed His
    Almighty
    lips together
    somewhere
    in eternity

    and kissed
    us
    into

    existence?


    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....pressed his
    almighty
    lips together
    somewhere
    in eternity
    and kissed us
    into
    existence?


    Ms A this is poem enough for me. Excellently beautiful as usual.

    BE
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um
    i lovedided this
    alyce
    lovedided it

    from a fan
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh Yeah!!

    Lovely Scribe my sista on dis piece here!!
    I thank you for sharing! Flow on!! I'm Lovin your work!!
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. :)

    alyce
     
  6. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, don't make me call you by your otha name. Make we wanna holla bad words! Sheeeeeit!

    BRB
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to agree..the ending to this wonderful peace captures everything..

    what a beautiful, spiritual way to describe the kind of love you feel when you are complete in every way, with another..

    K
     
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    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i float on saturns sunset, just to take a glance at that kind of love...
    alyce, this is where i'm at...thanx

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Alyce.


    ...this one made me catch my breath
    & exhale ssssslllllow. i loved it. very
    beautiful-ly done... as ALWAYS. :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know you but it seems that if I did, you could make me understand feminine thoughts in a whole different light. Unless you just another undercover female pimpologist pimping these brother's minds with such poetic ease...
     
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