Black Poetry : In School

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In School

    A drastic call but a basketball is no stranger to a hoop
    After game anger brings disputes but I’m like ranger boots
    Keep my feet dry and cool and try rule on the court
    But need school to support my advancement in this fort
    So pass the textbook take a complex look at my situation
    Flip pages while my script rages see plans that demands concentration
    And study need a firefighter to dampen the flame in my brain
    Knowledge bless and anoints all my stress points, spandex dew rags
    My Lex have true tags registered in Virginia, from the students standpoint few brag
    “So teacher my dome hurt can I skip the homework?”
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like overload. Need to get rid of the excess hoop baggage, and insert some textbook knowledge. Keep droppin them.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    droppin it on the low courts man MADD dis was rolling da ball
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked this piece, talent can take u so far but knowledge will take you above limits. Great piece!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER

    Well said, bruh...well said. Drop the knowledge.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got you, man. This is a cool one.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis thanks for responding for real yo
     
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    In School
    I was a bully in hoodies to dudes
    Starting fights right after school
    Break hats off to the right
    Cause that was the thang to do
    I was an original left hat breaker
    I used the right to play them
    Throw they sign up then spray them
    Football games were later
    Made the cut they hatin
    Books on my mind was later
    After practice and maybe
    Got a dime piece and laid her
    This is too much
    “Yo teacher my dome hurt can I skip the homework?”

    Much Love Poet
     
  10. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIGHT FLOW. SHORT SWEET AND TO THE POINT. KEEP DOING YOUR THING. IF EVERYTHING ISN'T IN BALANCE THEN SOMETHING WILL FALL SHORT.
     
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