Black Poetry : In Progress...............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NINI69, Jan 22, 2003.

  1. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEITTIN HERE SMOKIN AND WATCHIN DA PEOPLES COURT
    COURT OF THE PEOPLES WHAT IF MY PEOPLES HAD A COURT
    MADE UP OF REAL G'S OUT HERE JUST TRYIN TO PUT IN WORK
    UNDERSTANDIN THAT SOMETIMES **** WE WANT BE THE **** WE TAKIN
    NOT LOOKIN DOWN THEIR NOSE AND AUTOMATICALLY HATIN
    WHEN PRESENTED WITH THE FACTS IN YOUR CASE
    THEY KNOW EXTENUATING CIRCUMSTANCE IS A PLACE
    WE DONE ALL STAYED AT BEFORE
    DOIN THE DIRT WE DO DIRT BEHIND CLOSED DOORS
    NOT HURTIN NOBODY WHO WASN'T HURTIN THEMSELF
    BEFORE WE STEPPED ON THE SCENE
    THEY LEFT THEY CD'S OUT THEY LEFT THEY CAR KEYS OUT
    CAN'T THINK RIGHT WHEN THEY FEIN
    THEY WANNA BE HIGH WANNA BE MO BLACK
    THEY REALLY WANT TO BE WE
    THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND THAT'S TABU TO THE PLAN
    THEY WILL NEVER BE WE
    CUZ WHO WE ARE EXISTS ON A PLANE
    ONLY THE RIGHTEOUS WILL SEE
    WE IS THE KEEPER OF THE FAITH IN THINGS UNSEEN
    HE IS ALIVE IN WE - WE POSSES LIFE'S KEYS
    LOVE, FAITH AND CHARITY LOVE BEING THE GREATEST OF THREE
    WE MAKE LOVE LIVE INSIDE OF WE
    I CAN ONLY CARRY WHAT IS JOINED WITH YOUR SEED
    WE NEED TO CARRY ON WE PROCREATE WE RAISE OUR BABIES
    WHEN I WRITE I SAY THESE WORDS AND I FEEL THEM
    OTHERS HEAR THESE WORDS AND ATTEMPT TO STEAL THEM
    POSSESING THIRD EYE REALITY AWED BY THE GRAVITY
    CONTAINED HEREIN WHEN WILL WE BE FREE FROM THE HATIN
    FROM THOSE SUSPENDED IN ANTICIPATION
    AFRAID TO LIVE AND BREATHE AN ORIGINAL THOUGHT
    THEY HATE WE - JEALOUSY, ENVY AND GREED
    WE IS LOVE IS ESSENCE OF WE IS LOVE IS WE
    PEACE!

    (THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS)
    ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY NINI69/TBW 2003
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    hey NiNi69

    enjoyed the read from start to finish

    thanx for sharing

    pd

    :)
     
  3. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write
     
  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed reading this...was captured from the beginning.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well written love ya style
     
  6. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    APPRECIATION....

    POETICDELIGHT, UL820, SISTA STEELE AND $$RICH$$.............

    THEY SAY THAT IMITATION IS THE SINCEREST FORM OF FLATTERY. I SAY THAT IT IS APPRECIATION. TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND POST A REPLY THRILLS ME, INSPIRES ME AND ENCOURAGES ME.
    I APPRECIATE YOUR APPRECIATION. PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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