Black Poetry : In my trunk

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  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have in my trunk
    A tool box
    A laptop
    And a pool Q

    Hanging On my wall
    I have
    An Advanced degree
    A picture of a copper tone Christ
    And some carpenters tools

    In my mind
    I have a vision of success
    fears and regrets
    And millions of secrets

    In my pocket
    I have opportunities empty promises
    Possibilities infinitely
    And lint eternally…
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my house...I have a chess board...your move!
    I liked the way you delivered that piece...it was tight. thanks for sharing it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the doors are open
    this was awesome shaz
     
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    ooo, the concept here is just bangin. I bet you have in your heart a million pounds of faith, don't cha. :)
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis
    Thank you for the support but honestly, I am still shooting for the mustard seed.

    $$RICH$$
    always good to hear from you, glad you liked it.

    queentswana
    always glad to share and be appreciated, thank you very much for the support.
     
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    This was so slick, just crafted, really, flow on.
     
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