Black Poetry : In my spirit

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As you looked at my flesh
    You were unable to see
    The pain that was in my soul
    Every day and night haunting me
    As you looked at my flesh
    All you saw was the happiness in my eyes
    You never knew the sorrow
    Or the bitterness that trickled into my spirit
    So wounded I was
    So bitter and full of regret
    Looking,,
    Looking so far
    Looking so far back in the past
    And at night I wept
    Although you never saw me cry
    I tried so hard to be patient
    I even lied
    And pretended that I was fine
    So I see that I need to forgive you
    Please forgive me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    storm u pose a piece here that makes me think
    now forgive me !
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, that's coo. Thanks for enjoying this piece. Just flowin from my spirit, missed Rich! Stay cool
    Desert Storm
     
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