Black Poetry : In My Slumber Thoughts of U

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my slumber….
    My mind rambles and it begins to wonder
    What is we…
    What is us….

    Your never here leaving me to think
    As my tears run my inside aches

    Is it a false love or can it be real
    Or was it a chase for a thrill

    A bet off the thought....with friends
    To see if I fall….guess someone won
    Whatever it was worth to destroy once more
    My soul my gift my heart..as my thoughts grow
    Do you care…..

    My midnight is the darkest hour
    For my love pours…..unto my pillow

    I never knew love like this before
    As I am scorn once more
    Betrayal, trust and joy I have lost
    My love was tender and sweet

    Never lied never cheated
    But always true to what we are
    Cant sleep
    Cant eat
    Lost in you

    In the hush in the night
    You go about your own
    Forgetting a love that is true
    Here waiting…but you don’t care and I see it now

    Upon the sunlight I awaken to a brand new love
    But can you see..the love is you……

    (C)2004
    untitle life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome da love
    u pose is beauty
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was bittersweet, keep the flows coming.
     
  4. jazzymoonchild

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    Wow, I felt that Angel. It is amazing how heartache can affect you
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for
    letting my know ya can feel it
    i posed it right then huh?
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. caramelpython

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    :read: Yes angel you did do this well like a pro would do it. :shades:
     
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    wonderful poem sis
    it is indeed
    flowing in the love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    You wrote this one in the moment. It's very nice.

    :thanks: for being you.

    :toast:
     
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