Black Poetry : In My Pocket

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by URGelus, Dec 28, 2003.

  1. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    In my pocket I have a dream that I hold on to so tight
    A dream that it will always be you who tucks me in at night
    That it will be your arms that hold me close as I drift off to sleep
    And your shoulder that I cry on in the times when I am weak
    It’s your hand that I will hold for I trust only you to lead the way
    Only your lips will I kiss at the end of each and every day
    Within my dream it’s your voice that whispers softly in my ear
    Touching my heart with those three words that, before now, I use to fear
    In my pocket I hold a dream that is so very special to me
    And in your hand you hold my heart for you made my dream a reality
     
  2. Birddgurl2

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    this is an very enhancing poem
    i feel this poem
    keep up the powerful words
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so so sweet :) the stuff dreams are made of :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreams of truth this was very nicely pose'd
     
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    this is so beautiful and sweet..flow more...wonderful
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful
    flow on..likes dis drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sweetly posed. Like to hear more from you.
     
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