Black Poetry : In My Natural Hair

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  1. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my natural hair exists exotic energy
    that has been here for centuries
    strengthening me continuously for infinity
    allowing me to muster the ability to see,
    act, and think clearly

    In my natural hair
    the soul of Afrikan lives,
    which gives my spirit culture
    and foundation
    Enlightens me on the essence
    of creation
    Brings me education and elevation
    of the truth of my beloved Nubian nation

    In my natural hair
    there are Afrikan songs
    that make me STRONG
    That tells me who I am
    and where I belong

    In my natural hair
    There is positivity in a large capacity
    traveling at high velocities
    possessing infinite possibilities
    of peace, progression, and prosperity

    In my natural hair
    is powerfully refined protein
    packed with profound principle
    that makes me an invincible King

    In my natural hair
    Knowledge, wisdom, and insight
    have been twisted together to loc
    forming forces of passion and fire

    My natural hair
    Is magical
    Is spiritual
    Is original
    Is ESSENTIAL

    In my natural hair I've found
    FREEDOM and HAPPINESS.

    Christopher Donshale Sims a.k.a. Universoul
    All rights reserved
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a creatively proud scribe, I enjoyed this read.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing love this natural flow ....
     
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    call me sampson son....lol
    i did this piece you prosed
    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes the vibe
    ^5 flow on
    tight drop
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, poet, your skill is incredible. Every piece that I have read from you is another level of your talent. I can't wait to read more
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping:WooooWee Did I Love This...
    Loving My Natural Hair Right Long With You! :jumping:
     
  8. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much

    THANKS everybody for your inspiring and wonderful comments.

    They mean A LOT to me. Honestly.

    You all are so warm and kindred. Very beautiful energy is shared
    and created here. I LOVE that.

    Need to get back here more. I will definitely attempt to.

    Fam is fam right? ;-)

    Love, Peace and the Warmth of the Sun to you all :),
    Christopher Donshale a.k.a. Universoul
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed brotha fam is fam and YOU are fam so heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy lol
    I LOVE to see our people adorned in their natural crowns its a testament to the kings and queens who birthed us
    this was a beautiful allusion to that :)
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UniverSouL,
    U have sung well the hymn of the beauty and power of the natural....the natural locks in this instance.....as and ode to what is us and real....
    Scribe on.....

    Peace and Blessings...
     
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