Quiet Poetry Lounge : In My Minds' Eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Skybeauty, Oct 13, 2006.

  1. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    This Here Is About
    INTIMACY
    LOVE
    UNDERSTANDING
    a BONDING OF TWO SOULS

    U and I have this sweet connection
    an association of togetherness
    oneness
    we are a whole

    When you touch me
    I can Feel you

    How you caress my flesh
    you send me to a place of pardise...
    ..
    ..
    ..
    ..
    ..
    If only for a moment
    with only one touch

    we get lost in each others eyes
    external things matter not

    the union of us holds us

    then you taste me and then I you

    embracing our imagination
    with eyes closed
    and
    expactations faded

    I'm all you see in the darkness of your eyes, as I look at you

    There are so many things we can do
    embraceing our imagination

    Lets explore each other in a more than intimate way

    So...
    ...
    ...
    I undress you
    Then I caress you
    Taking my time
    To love you

    Feeling your flesh against mine...a full body nakeness
    Remember....Lets Take Our Time
    This is tantric love
    No intercourse
    just a meeting of the minds
    A mystical night full of pure delight
    the touching of ones soul

    The closesness I feel from you is what i would like to feel for a lifetime
    our affection, warmth a connection of intimate estasy
    taking us so far away from this world that we could hardly breathe

    and you leave me the sweetness of your kiss .....
    As I lye upon your chest and rest



    "Sky"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just beautiful the wholesome was felt
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sky:
    This was truely a lovely write.
    I floated on every word.
    Very nice my sista.

    Much Luv
     
  4. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    ahhh...a "tantric" love....I can feel that, much deeper than intercourse.

    a sensual and enticing write...i can taste the intimacy in this write...

    great scribe.....