Black Poetry : In my Mind

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    While I am Lost in transition
    I follow you
    While I seek truth
    I think of you
    I try to remain uplifted
    and Not hide from you
    I do not know where I am going
    So I cry from you
    I do not cry away
    I cry with your Grace
    In the back of my mind
    With so much been taken away
    And regained with you
    How can I remain
    Still in this place


    I will not shy
    Even when it is hard to cry
    I will have you in my mind
    While it is attacked with
    the hate
    Of Past and Spirits
    I will pray to you
    But my words are hard to find
    All the while You are in my Mind
    Lost in the Transition
    You are the reason why....
    I can stand now
    So out of my mouth
    The words I write
    Cut through the Difficulties
    You are always on and in my Mind
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May God grant you peace no matter the storm. I felt serenity within this write.
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless you and your Words :)

    Sister Watzinaname
    You are in my Heart....Truly in My heart
    You words are precious to me and I thank you
    Sometimes we are still tested through our journey
    Preparation is the Key.....
    Thank you Watz :)
     
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    I'm feeling this flow Ms. Plat and there are so many different ways you can absorb this. Definitely a heart-felt write! I love it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we are tested beyond compare but once one realize there place
    through the transistion where there only there is preparation so we must get
    ready for the time upon the journey as we journey.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hey real nice piece poet

    although there is some sadness

    i think if you wrote this for someone

    i would love to see their reaction

    if they are real then they will feel

    you

    peace
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Plantniumlitty:heart: Jezus embraces you..


    When we our on our way to the light..

    moving l
    earning getting
    up falling somethimes.....


    remembody told us the rode would be easy..


    but he wont leave us...:11400:

    marry marry..



    Loveau
     
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    I feel strenght in your piece and it is definitly motivating.....I am totally moved my the expression that you bring across...I Love it *Touching*
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    :grouphug: Sister Hope....You are so wonderful. Sometimes it is hard for my expression to come out...and I am not always sure i can....or fulfill it right.....This was one of the pieces where it did......Thank You

    :grouphug: $$RICH$$ Thank You so much.......Yes preparation is definitely a major part of forward pacing......continuing through life.....Even when we are tested(often to a point where we feel beyond measure) The Possibility of the outcome is always great......It's a journey....all journeys have trials.....and they all have purpose and meaning....Thank You

    :grouphug: Street So'ja A lot of the time I have a lot to say and do not know how to say it....A lot of the time I am confused or am having trouble with guidance.....or even just recollecting the past and it is all just so much. This is one of the results.... I need to connect.....Hmmmmmm.....I think I would actually Like to see the reaction to one of my poems as well:haha:
    Thank You for coming through Bro....Bless

    :grouphug: Ms. Aurora Flower.....Sis you are Blessed....Thank You....It is true thats is apart of how we survive ....Falling... and getting up to continue.....Living.....God Bless

    :grouphug: Sky Beauty......First off I love the name :D Second It is very nice to meet you...I think This is the first time we have Joined in the Threads, So....Whats Going On?!? :D Next I want to say Thank You Sis for comming to chack me out, and especially giving your kind words:hearts2: What You said means worlds and I appreciate it.....God Bless Sis


    ~Peace Love And Blessings Family~
    :grouphug:
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY:
    Very nice write.
    I feel the feeling in this piece.

    Much Luv
     
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